Here are some suggestions:
Read through each question and answer carefully, making sure that you have answered all parts of each question.
Check for any spelling, grammar, or punctuation mistakes, and correct them as needed.
Double-check your character's name, race, and other details to ensure that they are accurate.
Make sure that your answers are clear and concise, and provide enough detail to give a complete picture of your character and your Mabinogi experience.
Finally, take a break and come back to your application later with fresh eyes to ensure that you haven't missed anything. bluey